I need help with email messaging

I need someone make it nity with adding good words and fix grammer to send it as acadimec student via email who able to help ?

 

Hello Linda,

 

I applied last semester for getting acceptance letter in MS program , and I provide three recommendation with application and fee, could you please look to my file and I need to have Acceptance letter to upgrade my file from undergraduate to graduate in my government

 

Respects

 

Dan